Emily
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Join date : 2009-06-28
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 | Subject: Hey, Brandon?  Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:03 pm | |
| Just some pointers from an author, okay. 1. In that chapter with the bear, tell me she's still like, little, lol. I can't tell.  2. Itex didn't make her a lycan ''/ It's bugging me 'cuz Itex did shit to her. ._. You did good on Paige though. Good work. | |
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